CHARLIE KAUFMAN: To begin... To begin... How to start? I'm hungry. I should get coffee. Coffee would help me think. Maybe I should write something first, then reward myself with coffee. Coffee and a muffin. Okay, so I need to establish the themes. Maybe a banana-nut. That's a good muffin.
This course is to continue your development as a screenwriter. It is broken into a series of 13 short lessons, feedback, one-on-one meetings, and 4-5 pages of writing due each week.
Each lesson is a building block in understanding scriptwriting and story and each week’s writing is to reflect your understanding.
The first twelve (12) weeks of writing will be focused on you writing two 30 page scripts and your final assignment will be a completed version of one of these scripts, with rewrites. Each week you are expected to submit the next 4-5 pages of your ongoing project.
You will also be expected to offer feedback to your fellow classmate’s writing in class and meet for weekly one-on-one meetings with the instructor.
For some of you, this may seem like an intense schedule, but it is designed for you to develop good writing habits.
This is a process-oriented course. Although we will have weekly lectures and discussions about story and structure, as well as discussions about tension, choice, status, and change my belief is that your best path for understanding comes through usage. This means regular writing.
Trottier, David. The Screenwriter’s Bible. 7th ed. Beverly Hills: Sillman-James Press, 2014.
This text is chosen because of its extensive style guide regarding the formatting of scripts. Although many scripts (some of which may be discussed in class) will break these rules, consider this as a guideline for any issues of formatting.
If you have any questions about formatting, they will be reflected by this text. If you are serious about being a screenwriter, consider purchasing this book.
Weekly Class Structure:
A typical week will operate like this:
- Class: Each Tuesday evening at 7 p.m. (Saskatchewan time), we’ll meet for a new lesson and roundtable discussion of writing from the class.
- Writing: You have five days to work on your scripts, which will be due Sunday at 7 p.m. (Saskatchewan time). Anything submitted after this time will be considered late.
- Feedback: Each week, a group will be selected to share their writing with the class. You will have two days two read the writing and make notes.
- Weekly One-on-One Meetings: You are also expected to schedule a maximum 15 minute call or video discussion (via Discord) with the instructor at a select times between Wednesday to Friday. You will share your reflections on your previous week of work. I’m interested what went well, what went poor, and what you’ve learned.
Each part of the weekly lesson (writing, feedback, meeting) will be out of 2.5%. You will be marked on whether the work meets the objectives of the week (a full 2.5%), doesn’t meet all learning objectives (1.25%), or is incomplete (work not submitted by deadline: 0% on assignment).
The focus of your mark will be on completing the work, critical thinking, and evaluation. Learning objectives will be updated each week, which include regular expectations such as proper formatting, grammar, punctuation and spelling, as well as showing an understanding of the concepts discussed in the lessons (such as theme or plot).
As well, you will be graded on the feedback that you offer each other, which requires that you read each other’s scripts, and offer ideas or suggestions that either improve the work or discuss the effect the work had on you as a reader. If the work is impeccable, then you can still discuss why it worked.
Lastly, you’re expected to have a weekly meeting with me where you will reflect on your own work. Consider this an opportunity to ask questions, to discuss how to improve your writing, identify weaknesses and strengths, or think about the effects it had on others.
Finally, you are expected to submit a final draft of either of your two scripts (only one) on Sunday Jan. 18 that will be marked out of 10%.
Your overall grade throughout the semester will be broken down:
|Assignment||12 X 2.5%||30%|
|Feedback||12 X 2.5%||30%|
|One-on-one meeting||12 X 2.5%||30%|
|Final Rewrite||1 X 10%||10%|
All work will be submitted by students to your group via Discord as a PDF.
(If you are having troubles with either PDFs, URCourses, Discord, or anything else, don’t hesitate to contact me at email@example.com.)
If you have to submit work and are having trouble, you must contact me 24 hours before the deadline. Don’t leave this to the last minute. Also, it isn’t my responsibility to submit your work.
Your writing assignment must be submitted by Sunday at 7 p.m. (Saskatchewan time). All work submitted late will be considered incomplete (0%).
Never apologize for the work that you submit. The only criteria is that the work meets the learning objectives, is legible, and is checked for spelling, grammar, and punctuation before submission.
All work submitted for this class must be original to this class.
Please note that any prior work that has been submitted to or graded in other courses may not be used.
Any plagiarized work will be an immediate 0%. The instructor will also contact the Associate Dean of Undergraduate Studies in the Faculty of Media, Art, and Performance and this may affect your academic record.
One of the central principles of this course is to share your writing with others, so that it may be read and discussed critically. This activity is invaluable in realizing how your writing is interpreted and allows you to learn from others and grow as a writer.
On the first day of class, you will be divided into groups. Each week, you will submit your writing to this group for reading and feedback.
This is not group work. Each student presents their own writing. The groups are only used to organize the discussion and help you not feel overwhelmed with the amount of reading.
Discussion of a script is not to consider what you how to be only what you like or dislike about the writing, but to think about it critically.
Do not tell a person how you would rewrite their work. Instead, ask yourself how the writing works on you, how it affects you, and what suggestions might produce different effects with further revision. Since 30% of your mark is based on your feedback, all students are expected to contribute each week.
Although the writers of the work can express thoughts, concerns, or issues when they submit their work, there is great value in listening.
Let your work speak for itself. There is immeasurable value in understanding what your writing is doing, even when you are not wanting those effects to occur.
All feedback must be presented during class. If you are missing from the feedback or don’t participate, you will be marked incomplete (0%).
Weekly One-on-One Meetings:
These discussions will be a place for you to consider how to improve your work and develop as a writer. Use this as an opportunity to highlight what you thought worked or didn’t work with your script and consider the critical feedback. What would you do differently next time or what lessons did you learn from the week? Also, ask questions.
The goal is to think critically and evaluate your work and your writing.
Occasionally, scenes from produced scripts may be shared in class. Although work on these scripts will not be for a mark, some students find it useful to consider the writing and the construction of these scenes.
It is also important to understand that key details of the plot may be revealed in these scripts, so spoilers of the films may occur.
Due to the intensive schedule of this class, there is very little leeway to fall behind in your work.
There will be no extensions considered for your work. Your failure to submit work, whether a script or feedback, is an inconvenience to the rest of the class.
If you have an unexpected emergency, please contact me immediately, so we can make arrangements about the work.
The classes have been designed as an opportunity for learning, discussion, and practice. Art and craft occurs through application, execution, and reflection. You are expected to participate in class regularly, to be on time for any scheduled assignments, to complete assigned readings, to participate in discussions, and to conduct yourself in a respectful manner.
It is your responsibility for your success in this class.
You have been given specific page lengths. Scripts not respectful of this requirement will be considered deficient and marked accordingly. Diligence, conciseness, and brevity are regarded as important skills by the instructor.
And again, any plagiarized work will be an immediate 0% and the instructor will contact the Associate Dean of Undergraduate Studies in the Faculty of Media, Art, and Performance.
We will sometimes consider writing with strong language and mature themes that are deemed artistic in nature or commonplace in the commercial market. However, you must put warnings at the head of your submissions to indicate when there are such topics, language, or subject matter that may upset some readers.
I expect students to show discretion in what they use in their own writing. Students should speak to me prior to sending out writing for workshops that they feel might cross this line. If this cannot be handled in a suitable manner, restrictions to all assignments will be made.
While, I believe discussion and a difference of opinion is good, I expect it to remain in an objective manner, focusing on the technical form of the script, and not personal.
If you feel that the subject matter/language/etc. bothers you, you have the choice not to read the script and skip the discussion but please contact me beforehand.
As always, I am open to hearing your thoughts, so feel free to contact me via Discord or email, or schedule a meeting over Zoom to discuss (you will be emailed a meeting link once you schedule).
Last updated Jan 8, 2020
- Class 1 (Jan. 12): Intro and Formatting
- Class 2 (Jan. 19): WOARO
- Class 3 (Jan. 26): Descriptions and World and Character Building
- Class 4 (Feb. 2): Mythic Structure
- Class 5 (Feb. 9): Save the Cat Structure
- Reading Week (Feb. 16)
- Class 6 (Feb. 23): TV Structure
- Class 7 (Mar. 2): Outlining
- Class 8 (Mar. 9): Rewriting
- Class 9 (Mar. 16): Scenes
- Class 10 (Mar. 23): Sequences
- Class 11 (Mar. 30): Internal Wants and Obstacles
- Class 12 (Apr. 6): Theme
- Class 13 (Apr. 13): Real World
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