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David Gane
David Gane

Stephen King says in On Writing that some of the best rewriting advice he ever received was from an editor's note:

Formula: 2nd Draft = Ist Draft - 10%. Good luck."

Where would you take it from if you had to cut 10% from your draft? What if you couldn't cut a big part of the story? Could you carve it out of your paragraphs or sentences?

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Co-writer of the Shepherd and Wolfe young adult mysteries, the internationally award-winning series, and teacher of storytelling and screenwriting.

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