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Tim Ferris on Feedback

David Gane
David Gane

Dickie Bush shares Tim Ferris's thoughts on feedback:

What great advice:

Highlight anywhere boring, anywhere confusing, anywhere your mind starts to wander.

As well as:

What is the 10% I must keep
What is the 20% I should cut immediately

This is great advice on tightening up your writing.

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Co-writer of the Shepherd and Wolfe young adult mysteries, the internationally award-winning series, and teacher of storytelling and screenwriting.

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