Try to see your writing from the reader's perspective: Can they understand it? Does the story track?
Often the logic or the cause and effect of a scene, paragraph, or sentence is messed up. If I'm a reader, these moments pull me out of the story.
Hone your sentences from the reader's perspective and keep them immersed in your story world.
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